martes, 14 de mayo de 2013

Essay

Alternative or Conventional Medicine, which is the best?


I prefer the conventional medicine because is more proved and safe for us also it has fewer side effects than the alternative medicine.

The medicines have two branches, natural medicine also called the alternative medicine and the conventional medicine.
The natural medicine or alternative medicine is medicine that uses extracts of flowers to be used as drugs, acupuncture, hot rock and etc. And sometimes it can be a swindle.

I think that the conventional medicine is the best because it can be proved and for do a doctor you must have studies; this will certify that you are a good doctor and not a fraud. Also, it is safe and it has fewer side effects than the alternative medicine. Also where you will be having surgery or be with a certified doctor you are going to be in a clean and sterilized place.

Because as a result of the bad treatment and swindles of the alternative medicine, I will say that the conventional medicine is the best because in most of the surgery and treatments you have the results that you want.

Finally, to summarize we can say that the conventional medicine is the best because you will have a good treatment and results, and the alternative medicine also can be safe but we can’t confirm that what they are doing is fine.

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  1. Fernando, some corrections for your work:

    I prefer conventional medicine because it is more proved and safe for us also it has fewer side effects than alternative medicine.

    The medicine has two branches, natural medicine also called the alternative medicine and the conventional medicine.
    The natural medicine or alternative medicine is the medicine that uses extracts of flowers to be used as drugs, acupuncture, hot rock and etc. And sometimes it can be a swindle.

    I think that the conventional medicine is the best because it can be proved and to be a doctor you must have studies; this will certify that you are a good doctor and not a fraud. Also, it is safe and it has fewer side effects than the alternative medicine. Also where you will be having surgery or be with a certified doctor you are going to be in a clean and sterilized place.

    Because as a result of the bad treatment and swindles of the alternative medicine, I will say that the conventional medicine is the best because in most of the surgery and treatments you have the results that you want.

    Finally, to summarize we can say that the conventional medicine is the best because you will have a good treatment and results, and the alternative medicine also can be safe but we can’t confirm that what they are doing is fine.

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